My latest Audio submission

 
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LachlanDavis
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:21 am    Post subject: My latest Audio submission Reply with quote
I guesse im showcasing again....
I have some songs on the internet under the creative commons license, most of them are rubbish that i made years ago but i made a new one thanks i thinks all right.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/122365

Take a look and tell me what joo think Smile
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YanPL-tse
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
gee, better than I estimated, listenable even for those who don't like rock. I'll try rest of your NG submissions.
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Myrph
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I must say that was pretty awesome, especially for homebaked stuff! Probably wouldn't download it, but didn't mind listening to it in the background!

Keep up the good work mate! ;p
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TwiTerror
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hey mate! I'm glad to hear some more composers traveling around these parts of the interweb!

This really isn't bad, although some of the production work on the guitar is a little weird (sounds very thin in the mix initially).

My production skills aren't exactly top-notch (really been working on that for TSE2 and in the past year they've become much better than what TSE1 showcased (by a lot, I'd sa)), but I think if that main riff had a little more bass it'd be more sound.

The crash cymbals also seem a tad on the loud side, but that's just nitpicky. Overall, I really enjoy this. If you're looking for some good feedback I'd encourage you to submit your stuff to www.traxinspace.com. It has a really friendly atmosphere (as long as you don't take the current rating system too seriously. If you're looking for serious comments, you simply need to request them from the right people. I can get you pointed in the right direction, if you like...).

Anyway, keep it up. This is a lot better than your description led me to think it would be. Never sell yourself short! (:
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LachlanDavis
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hye thanks for your feedback. Yeh i had quite a battle with the bass, see i dont own a bass yet and borrowing one seemed like to much effort for what it was. So i just used the FL studio plug in. I had a long battle with the EQ and the volume. I EQed the bass so that it sounded good and gave room for the kick but then it would clip the whole song Smile So ill take a look at it again and see what i can do.

And ill see what i can do about the crash symbals (its another plug in) Wink

Cheers guys
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